Do you mean the 'Track changes' tool?
I'm not much of a beta-reader; have done only once for Mona. I admit I borrowed some ideas from TJ.
But I'm not a grammar nazi like her, nor do I have an eye for minor mistakes.
So, I'd probably beta like this! I don't like using too much
bold words because then the story almost becomes invisible to me. I use symbols instead.
KEYItalics ? = choices / suggestions
Bold = add changes
--> = new paragraph
() = remove words/ letters
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Lois was in love with Superman. -->
She also li(c)ked Lex Luthor. He was a han
dsome man and took he
r to nice places. How (can)
could she decide? Sadly, Lois (thinks)
thought that she (will never)
would never / will never be able to choose. -->
(Then)
Suddenly? (their is)
there was a knock on her door. (It's)
It was Clark! -->
" Clark! Come in
," Lois said, and he (did.)
entered? -->
"Lois, I love you!" (S)
said Clark. -->
This made Lois happy. "Clark, I love you too!" (S)
she said (.)
, then (S)
she frowned. "But
I also
love Lex and Superman." -->
"Well I am Superman (.)
, " said Clark. He spun into his costume to show her. -->
Lois giggled. "Are you Lex
, to
o ?"
" No
," said Clark.
" Only (a superman)
a *super*man / Superman, / a [b]superman [/b] who loves you!
" The End
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PS. I could detect only that much grammatical errors, and even though I won't mind if it is left as it is, I wholly agree with Classicala regarding the explanations/specifications/elaborations/suggestions.
