She also licked Lex Luthor.
Eewww...she licked Lex. Gross.
I don't do any beta-reading, although I was one of the Archive GEs for a while. I tend to be grammar-oriented, so most (though not necessarily all) of the spelling and punctuation mistakes would jump out at me. If I tripped on any huge plotholes along the way, I would probably make a gentle suggestion there as well.
Kathy