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Clark could give her things, anything she wanted from anywhere in the world, and give it to her within seconds, and with all of his heart.
I guess the way Luthor said it it really did not sound like information to anyone but Lois.

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‘Son, if a girl isn’t interested in you without you having to buy her love, then she isn’t a girl worth pursuing.’
Clearly he is still hurt by how Lana treated him.

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Then he remembered that he already had Lois’s love for free.
grumble Luthor is all over the place in this sotry. grumble

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If only Luthor hadn’t have showed up.
I think this would work better "hadn't showed up." It just seems a bit awkward with the have in there.

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Luthor kissed her cheek. “Take your time, my dear. I don’t mind waiting.”
Which is why he came right over when she did not answer his phone call?

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Lois headed towards her bedroom, stopped, and turned back around. Her eyes met and held Superman’s. “Thank you.”
hyper she is thanking him.

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Luthor made an overt look at the damage. “Perhaps you should come with a warning label, Superman. Do you often burst into women’s apartments? Should I have an all points bulletin issued on LNN?”
So far Lois having a pretend relationship with Luthor has just opened Superman up to more ridicule.

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“So, you say. She could have been screaming it in passion,” Luthor responded.
Considering how she reacted to seeing Superman, no, not at all.

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“Temper, temper, Superman. You wouldn’t want to have to buy Lois a new broom as well, would you?” Luthor taunted. “The fact is you and I both know she can never have the kind of relationship she wants with you. We both know I can give her everything she could ever want in life.”
I really dislike Luthor.

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Clark couldn’t be intimate with her, or marry her, and she would never be able to bear his children,
whinging that he thinks this.

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but he knew a platonic love with Clark would be a better life than Luthor could ever give her.
This is true, but I hope Lois lied about the hospital.

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In his gut, Clark knew that someday it would come to that, and Lois would want a real love that a non-evil man could give her and he would have to let her go.
Even if she can't convince him that the curse is false, I don't see her ever being able to leave him.

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For now, this was a non-worry, he told himself. Lois would never fall for Luthor’s charms.
I am so glad that it appears he is right, at least for this go around. S

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he loved Clark and that was all there was to it.

For now.
I wish he had more hope.


John Pack Lambert