FDK - Part two -
Because there weren’t any Mai Ties?
Reverse psychology?
Isn’t that kind of redundant? Well, I guess there is role play. And in ancient times, people sold themselves into slavery. But then, she doesn’t have Clark to correct her.
So sex slave does not equal concubine, is what you're saying?
Umm…sorry, Perry. They killed Lois and sent back a clone.
No wonder she agree to marry Jimmy... in 10 + years.
It’s Tuesday, so yeah, proably.
Um... Foreshadowing?
But Tuesday works too.
Great. Billionaire outside.
Close, obnoxious gift giver. Or Alt-Clark, one of the three.
Sorry, for the diagram you'll have to check out the Jai sex dream journal over on the Nfic boards...
Umm…is there really that much of a difference?
Yes! Every 4th Saturday of each month the criminals take a day of rest.
Isn’t she kind of shoveling a six-foot deep hole there?
You mean, never say never?
A man without a body really shouldn't be able to be "scared" off. I mean, bite the only tongue that talks to you.
Those that order a salad. The green one. With vinegar. Light on the oil. And a small bottle of Evian.
That's the one.
Yeah. You just phone Golden Palace and order the Peking Duck. Then you go there, pay, and take the dish with you.
<<cough>> the language, not the cuisine. <<cough>>
Working girls checked for STDs every two weeks and separate staff for maids and entertainment.
Um... Michael, Smallville is not Tombstone... At least, not the Smallville of 1995.
You pay for the privilege of earning your keep. Them hillbillies sure have gotten the drop on the city slicks.
Oh, you caught my homage to
City Slickers huh?
Oh dear. She should have brought Jimmy after all.
"Jimmy, Perry has sent us to another all-inclusive resort to check out... Jimmy! Jimmy! Come back! This one isn't on a island run by a crazy man. It's in Kansas."
Lasoses Jimmy; once he's tied up. "As I was saying, Perry said you can do
all the activities at the resort. I'm going to do photos and check out the local town, while you stay at the
resort and do everything they have to offer."
/notices how Maisie cleverly circumvented the name, the capitalization, and now she can tell Lois ‘Sorry, no vacancies’ and send her on her way without causing suspicion. Especially, since Lois herself offered Maisie an out.
See, this is what I meant that you have the wrong version on off my hard-drive. That was V-1. The final draft was V-3. I know not as much well fun stuff, but I decided to used some of that good stuff I cut from V1 and use it on a new Nfic plot bunny... but I'll have to wait until this Trilogy is complete. So, sometime in 2013. Maybe.
Okay, Maisie isn't a rocket scientist.
You mentioned something about getting part 14 ready in the FDK thread?
Yep, done. Italics and Bold markers in place, spacing complete, final read-through done. Oooh, I've got to pick up my
smilie for my FDK thread. Thanks, Michael. Owe you one!
