Sheila - thank you smile .

However...

I think I may need to rework the part where Clark is changing clothes. In another spot, one of them thinks it more explicitly, but him changing has never really bothered her if their in the middle of a conversation or whatever. Now, it reminds her of Paul and what happened there.

How's this?

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She hadn't minded before, but something about him undoing his belt and button sent a sickening feeling into that empty pit in her stomach this time and she struggled to keep the face of her attacker out of her mind.
Thanks again wink .
Carol