Laura said:
I was getting more and more frantic as I read, watching the scroll bar get smaller and smaller as I read down the page
That's exactly what I was doing!
I read this part after the 'not' was added, but if I had read it before, I don't think I would have been mad, just confused, because I have a hard time imagining either of you ending a story that way. So I'm very glad this isn't the end and that we have one more part coming. I'm looking forward to it!
