I loved it Sue! So sweet but so sensual! I love their kisses and caresses on the couch, but I love expecially Lois' thoughts at the end of this part; I always thought that after Clark' killer smile at the bedroom' door, Lois' thoughts would have been on him for a long time! After your fabulous scene, things are surely on the right course for them!
I like very much the dialogue about Luthor rebirth, and how Lois makes clearer her feelings about the whole situation, I always thought her words to him on the street were too... Lame? Light? Lacking? I can't find the right word in English, sometimes it's so frustrating!
I can't wait to read Clark thoughts, expecially after Lois' involuntary declaration of love!
Simona
who thinks that this is perfect as PG story, because hopefully there will be a Nfic sequel! 
