A nice story, David.
In it we get to see the essence of our two leads. Even with his memory gone, Clark is still true to his 'real' self, and the things that are important to him; Lois, and helping people.
We also get to see Lois come to the aid of her friend. While she wasn't the fairy tale wife and lover that Clark had dreamed she was, she was still loyal to her friend and in helping him in his time of need she was able to come to terms with her own feelings.
Overall, a well thought out, compact yet complete story. Looking forward to your next foray into fanfiction.
Tank (who wonders when David will catch the Wendy disease for looooong fics)
