Actually, this is feedback for the whole thing, which I have just read in one sitting.
David, what amazes me is how you can express so much emotion in so few words. The story is beautifully written, too. A joy to read.
In the early parts, I was guessing away like mad. Was this an alt-Clark? Was this our Clark but with the 'wrong' memories?
And I so wanted to strangle Cat!
Yeah. Delightful.
Except for that pesky thing with the epilogue. Now, that's just cruel.
Chris
