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Clark didn’t like it, but he knew when he was licked.
Fortunantly he is totally wrong about what is up with Lois.

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Perry pointed at him. “Don’t say that. We’ll be able to publish once he’s been arrested.”
And how will that happen with no evidence?

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Clark held up his hand. “I know. She did this to save the Planet.”
grumble that is just close enough to the truth that Perry will not realize how wrong Clark is.

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“I don’t know about you, but I don’t feel very ‘saved’.” His boss raised an eyebrow. “I was beginning to wonder if she’d told you.”
Oh no, Perry will think they actually spoke.

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“It wasn’t until Jimmy told me about our new owner did I put her words together with what was going on and realized what she was trying to tell me.
I think that should be "new owner that I put".

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Did she? “I don’t like her decision or execution, but I have to admire her motivation,” Clark admitted. “And her guts and her determination to do anything to save what she loved.” And most everything else about Lois.
Perry will even think this means Clark realizes that Lois still loves him.

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“There would be no point for her to stay away now,” Perry insisted.
Clark really should ask Perry to elaborate and stop assume he understands what is happening.

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He paused to pop a peanut into his mouth. “She still cares for you. She told me so.”
But will Clark believe it?

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No matter how Lois felt about Clark, she hadn’t chosen him.
Actually she has, just not told him that.

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If she had rushed down to LexCorp offices and barged into Lex’s office,
I think maybe this should be "down to the LexCorp Offices", or "down to LexCorp's offices".

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“Nice to see you too,” the homeless person with Jimbo’s face replied.
I was so hoping it would be Clark.


John Pack Lambert