I'm still reading with avid interest! Sorry about the lack of FDK... I misplaced my forum password for a while
A couple of general comments I've been holding onto for a while (when did you start this fic again?):
- The tone of the story -- oh, all the atrocities Lex commits!! And with such gusto! I really think that this is what Lois and Clark could have looked like had it aired on Thursdays at 9 PM instead of Sundays at 8. You've definitely made me despise the character more
- I absolutely LOVE how you manage to weave canon story lines together without messing up the time line. It is very inventive and keeps the story from becoming predictable.
- Well fleshed out characters: I really like the way you write Cat, and your Star is absolutely hilarious. I forgot which chapter it was, but I need to read it again. Bobby Bigmouth is a great new addition! Also, what a great way to explain the two Hendersons
- Lois is is such as badass
Did you beat the record for the highest word count in a fanfic yet? Between this and Another Lois, it has to be true
I don't think I'd be able to read this as a completed story on the Archives... I probably wouldn't sleep for two months :p
I'm looking forward to your next parts
