Completely love this part. Kirk is great, too naive but a lot of fun! A trekkie, that's so cool!
I love the reference to the ... BORG collective!
I really hope he is not a red shirt, because if so, he got not much more time left XD

@Darth Michael: I love you intrepretation of NimoySpock and QuintoSpock, so true!!

Well good luck for the job and keep going, I have a lot of fun with your story. Nice version of Lois and Clark. And it is nice to see Cat with a brain and a good sense of humour. : )