That was a great story!
I loved their characterization, and I think this was a nicer way for Lois to learn Clark wasn't a pushover than when he sent her to the sewage reclamation plant. It actually seems even more in character for Clark, who is a nice guy. I enjoyed Lois's irritation, and maybe a hint of confusion, when Clark didn't turn around and insult her in return.
I think this Lois is going to quickly discover hating Clark is impossible, but the frustration with that could possibly make her take much longer to realize Clark is Superman.
Or else Clark could be in trouble, because Lois is pretty determined to discover their connection. One thing that saved Superman's identity for so long is that Lois never suspected anything was up.
I really want to know what might happen next...
That being said, excellent job! This stands very well by itself.
