After I sent my ficathon requests I decided that I was going to have to apologise to the poor individual who got my requests, which I will admit were half written as a challenge when I ran out of ideas for what I wanted/didn't want, but I've decided not to apologise to you Corrina, because this is one of the best stories I've read in a while! You have absolutely no need to rely on WAFF, you didn't even use my little loophole I gave you in my requests:
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Three things I don't want in my story:
(1) Lots of WAFF, fluff and all that sweet, sickly stuff.
See, you could have got away with a little bit of WAFF in there, I'm not totally cruel, or completely against WAFF when used in moderation! laugh

Still, I loved this story, I'm so glad my requests turned into something this good. Nice little a-plot, good bantering between Lois and Clark and lots of good characterisation. Basically a big fat ditto to what everyone else has said. Thank you so much!

- Alisha (who is now throwing her current ficathon effort into the bin and trying to write something half as good as this)