In many ways I feel like we're digging up a dead horse again. This conversation has been discussed and argued in many different forms over the years.
I did want to make one more note that actually pertains to the writing of this story. I had some extra time today so I reread it again. I realized that Dandello had made it quite clear that she was dealing with a flashback. If I hadn't chosen to copy that line, open a new window, start a feedback file, and paste it there I probably would have noticed it. As it was, I glossed over some important words in the process.
I still think it's a great story and look forward to part 3.
Elisabeth
