her thoughts wouldn’t settle down. They skittered around like flies on rotten fruit.
I love your sense of desciption, even if it is disgusting.
This is an interesting continuation. I expected that Taking Down a God was a replacement for, and not a precursor to Vatman. I really liked the story, but I needed a bit more of a transition. Lois seemed to recover from surgery almost immediately, and yet she doesn't make the connection that this Superman may be another clone like the last one.
Elisabeth
who is eagerly awaiting part 3
