Dandello, I like this story, whether as one complete whole or with part one as a standalone. You have so much potential here, it's hard to know where to begin. I only wonder if Lois - no, when Lois will remember how fast Clark was moving before the fake Superman threw him across the room.
And people, may I ask that you quit taking shots at me here? This thread is for Dandello's story feedback, okay? Let her know how you feel about her work. I already know how most of you feel about my story.
