My apologies if you thought I was being rude.
Oh no, not at all. I was kidding. I figured people may like my vignette because it was short. LOL.
I'm not really sure I see the correlation between Clark's features and reactions during sex and Lois stealing his pens and snitching his french fries (the passage you compared it to).
The correlation I saw was more subtle (and she was thinking about him in general, not just during sex) in that she is thinking about how she never thought about the fact that this stoic man/the man whose eyes blazed when he was around her (my story) and the man who was her companion and best friend/the man who saved her the world (yours) were one and the same. I'm sorry. I won't make any more comparisons or leave FDK if it seems erroneous and stupid.
EDITED TO ADD: PLEASE DELETE MY DUPLICATE POSTS ... NOT SURE WHY IT DID THAT EITHER!
