Hasini, this is looking *GOOD*.
I'm really picky about fics with kids, violence, and in this case, both. :p But it's just written really, really well, so it's not even an issue for me.
I thought the challenge was fascinating when you first posted it; the way you have answered it so far feels like it's going to be a hell of a ride! I am definitely going to try and keep up with this one!
JD