And you thought you wouldn't get any feedback! This beginning was wonderful! It made me want to go immediately read the rest of the fic and figure out what the heck was going to happen to these people. I read the "teaser" you posted before and I must say, I'm estatic you decided to write it! It looks really promising so far. Plus, I happen to love some doses of angst and waffyness throughout one story. Keeps it from getting boring/depressing.
Anyway, I'm really looking forward to reading more!
Laura
