Hasini! You posted! YAY! So, so glad.
I love the transition between the scary opening and the kid's play and back to scary again. Such a great contrast.
“Aunty Lois says that whenever she gets in trouble with bad men, Uncle Clark has to come and save them before she can hurt them too bad,” said Amber, as seriously as her halo of tinfoil would allow her to.
Oh, I love this. In this one line you've explained in such an adorable, *innocent* way that Lois' personality hasn't changed by being a wife and mother. And, once again, the innocence contrasts nicely again the worry building in my gut that something is indeed wrong with Lois.
Ash had to suppress the urge to burst out laughing. Lois was really an arrogant prat sometimes. Not that she could tell Lois’ daughters and goddaughter that.
So Ash is obviously a very good friend of the Kents. Hmm. Just storing that for later reference.
Lara honey, no.. Don’t start braying at the angels until you get on stage
Such wonderful and funny details, Hasini!
The scene between Lois and Archer is so tension-filled, it's wonderful. My stomach is all tied up in knots now.
More, please, soon!
