I stumbled across this story in the archive (I think that's the webpage I found it on?) and devoured it. Wow! Epic is right!
I loved how the splitting of time helped drive the urgency, flashing backwards, and then to the present, kept me on the edge of my seat!
I'm an angst sucker, and this certainly had it in boatloads!
The way Clark dealt with the aftermath of their night together was perfect. He kept her from running, yet also got her to admit that she didn't regret it, perhaps my favourite part of the whole fic.
I appreciated how you wrote Lex. He was a maniac and the show couldn't go there, however, I really think you did the criminally insane part of Lex to perfection.
Thanks for a great read!
