I read this last night, but it was so late/early in the morning that I just decided to go to bed after reading and didn't have time to post any comments until now.

Originally Posted by VirginiaR
Has this story come to a logical end or is it not quite there yet? My very patient beta reader, Christina, says it was not. She thinks there are some dangling strings that need knotting in a Part 4 (although, she believe my first draft Part 4 could use more work). Do you agree that I should fix those danglers now, or should I just leave the door slightly open (and end it for now), and therefore have a possible sequel sometime in the future? Let me know.
That's what got me into trouble with my Chuck fic and how my 4,000 word story turned into a 30,000 word story. I let the readers decide.

I would be fine with whatever you decided. It could end here and I would be satisfied, but having more story to read would be fun too.

Whichever way you choose to go I've enjoyed this story. It's been a fun read.


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