Wonderful, Nicole! I really liked this story, and I liked how Lois ultimately got out of the wedding with Clark’s help.
That was such a neat touch – Lex risking that others would also see his “true nature” if Lois chose to make a public fuss. He was taking quite a gamble, because even with all her support -- the Planet, her friends, Clark – supposedly removed, she is still Lois Lane and could have so easily made a scene.
And having Clark hear her whispers, and having him speak up at the exact right moment… brilliant!!
I think my favorite line is Rachel’s, when she and Lois are talking and she tells Lois how much she enjoyed the… non-wedding, I guess you’d call it, because it was so exiting, and that in Smallville you just forever held your peace.
~Toc
