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Originally posted by VirginiaR:
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Originally posted by ealperin:
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Ugh! Dumb italics!!!

Note to readers: All of Claire's thought speeches that are geared directly towards Louis with the secondary P.O.V. of "you", are the one's that are supposed to be italicized.
I believe you are missing your end italics marker after this line:

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Today I'm going to tell you everything, Louis.
And it looks like you're missing your end bracket here:

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Your eyes strike me, everytime, Louis. Every. Single. Time.[/I
You move back from thought to action after this line, so you need an ending italics marker here:

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I'm tempted to stroke your cheek, again, when you worry, like I do everytime to you, as Superwoman.
Working with italics in this format takes some practice (I should know the amount of italics I use in my stories :rolleyes: ). Just before you post make sure to double check your work by reviewing it in "Preview" mode. I'll be interested to read your story once you start posting it. It looks like you've changed everyone not just Lois & Clark (Does that mean Lex is Alexa now?! Hee hee) [/b]
Thanks for the help!! I'll try that out later in the day! wink

And yes, Lex is now Alexa, nicknamed "Lex"