See question.


Hi, everyone! I'm new, and a big Clois fan, here!


So, getting back to the fic, I'm not going to be doing the fic in a humorous/shocking/surprising kind of way, as I've seen some fanfic-ers do. Planning to do something totally different in regards to narrative. Using GB!Clark's/Claire's point of view, for this one.


Just switching their genders around: Louis for Lois, and Claire for Clark... I want to do it based off of an episode filled with drama and Clois and Superman/Superma'am interaction where Lois either does know about Clark's big secret, or that she's "in" on it . Any great episodes that you think would fit the bill, folks?

I think that would be interesting!

Here's the old thread to this:
http://www.lcficmbs.com/ubb/ultimatebb.php?ubb=get_topic;f=3;t=000544

And yes!

Michael

PS: You don't mean Clone-Lois, right?

Thanks for the link!!!

Much appreciated!!!

Thinking of doing some episode in-between the second, third, and fourth seasons....


And nope. No clones...yet.

Okay, I found out a few episode that interest me: "Operation Blackout", "Pheromone My Lovely", "And The Answer Is....", And This scene where Lex shoots Clark with an Atomizer ...

Or, I'll just make one up where Louis is wondering where Claire keeps running off too, after she leaves, and strokes his chin, before she goes, abruptly. Then he gets smarmy when she comes back, then ticked.....

Yep, possibly that last one may work out well...

Well there's "Target Jimmy Olsen" where he's always disappearing, "And the Answer is..." where Lois starts to tail after Clark...

You're welcome!
Michael

Hmmmm... Interesting...

"And The Answer Is.." is a very good episode!!! So's "We Have A Lot To Talk About..."

I wonder if I can mash those together....

Thanks, again....

It would be great to see this. A couple of us have one in the works but it's lagging.

I'd love to read it! I read some of the genderbend fics we have on the archive and I enjoyed it a lot. It would be great to get a new one!

It's great to welcome a new writer on the boards! The more, the merrier!

Andreia

I'll try to crank something out, soon! At the moment, I've got some essays to finish. One, in fact, on Teri's Lois. The other, on the central character in "Supergirl: The Movie"...


This should be interesting to see... :rollseyes:

Hi, there! Thanks for the warm welcome!!! Can't wait to crank this baby out! Going to use first person narrative for this, from Claire's P.O.V. Just had an epiphany in the last genderbend thread where this person just blew my mind away...Pure. Brilliance.

^Just. FRAKING. Brilliant!!! BRILLIANT, I tell you!!!

Looking forward to seeing this on the boards! It's been too long since one of those came along Michael

Thanks! That's what I keep hearing around these parts!!! Can't wait to take a crack at it. By the way, Claire will not, I repeat, will not be wearing a wig when she changes from Claire to Superwoman.

Here's a snippet, from my own remake of the beginning of the episode "And The Answer Is..." Enjoy!!!:

I walk up to the door of your apartment and knock.

I didn't need superhearing to hear you holler, "Hold on!", from your bathroom.

I x-ray through the door, and see you shaving, with only a towel around your buff waist.

You check yourself in the mirror, wipe your chin clean, stealthily tiptoe to the door unlock it, then scurry back into the bathroom, leaving the door open, as I walk in uneasily.

"Louis?"

"I'll be out in a minute. You're a little early."

"I know... It's just-There's something I want to talk to you about-"

I hear the hair dryer kick on, as you say, "I can't hear you! Hold on, I'll be out in a minute."

I take my time, walking around your living room, picking up a photo with us at The Kerths, my fingers gently tracing your tuxedo-clad outline, in the photo.

It isn't easy to say what I'm about to say to you, Louis, and I'm, actually, feeling uneasy about your reaction to it.


"Hey, where are we going for breakfast?" You ask from the bathroom, whose door is ajar, now.

"I thought we'd try Callards." I say, absently, my baby blue eyes lingering on your happy brown ones, in the photo.

"Great, Rao...Why does this have to be so difficult for me?" I murmur to myself.

"What?! I can't hear you!" You say. Your voice inflicting an octave. An exact octave.

I smile, shake my head, and put the photo down.

The memories of your first sighting of me, as Superwoman, flood through me.

Saving you from a military rocket, that managed to pop out a missile, plunging to earth, wasn't easy enough.

I still remember your facial reaction of me when I first saved you, Louis. It was a mixture of surprise, thankfulness, and amazement, which was written all over your face, during my arrival.

When you, somehow, managed to climb onto a military rocket, it took guts to do that, Louis. To bring me out in the open like that, as I, still hovering in midair, was flying after you, during your "unexpected" trajectory, was one I'll never forget, Louis.

The same goes for your reaction, after I had peeled you off it, and placed you on that rooftop, as a shocked look came across your face, was another one that I'll never forget, Louis.

So was trying to hide my secret from Trask, lie detector or not.

Flying after the missile, not rocket, was another story.

It was easy to do your first interview, Louis, and, come to think of it, I can't help but feel... vulnerable. Human, around you[; worried about your reaction to this, one of the biggest scoops of your career.

So why do it, Claire? Why keep it a secret after all these years, when you could've told me? Why now?

The answer, itself, isn't an easy one, Louis, it never really was; To keep me from hurting inside. For my protection. To keep me from losing you.

But today's [i]different.

Today I'm going to tell you everything, Louis.[/i]

I look at the Kerths photo, again, for a minute, paused, then murmured to it, "Louis...I have something to tell you...I'm Superwoman."

That wasn't a good try.

"Louis? Have you ever noticed how much I look like Superwoman? Well, it's funny, because..."

I take off my eyeglasses, imagining what your response would be in this situation, again, and I sigh.

Truth of the matter is, Louis, I'm frustrated with myself for leaving you out in the dark, where you should've been with me, in the light.

My eyes linger towards you.

I x-ray you in bathroom, again, seeing you thread a comb through your hair, then, switching it off with a blink, back at the photo.


No. Not good either.

"Hey! Guess what? I'm Superwoman."

Nah. Third time's the charm, I guess.

I sigh, thinking this through, yet, again, "Louis, I've been eating to tell you this for a while, now...Before we go any further Into this relationship, you have to know that-"

"Claire? What are you doing?"

For the first time, I'm the one startled; I jam my eyeglasses back on, and look at you dress shirt on, tousled hair, and all.

You're at the edge of the bathroom, with a quizzical look on your face, powered hair dryer in hand, which you quickly flip off with a flick of your thumb.

"I... I've got something to tell you..."

I see you unplug the hair dryer absently, carrying it with you to the couch. Your hair, both tousled and windswept from the hair dryer, fell into folds onto your forehead.

"It's not good news, is it."

"Well, I don't know.Maybe." I murmur, softly, to you.

You look at me, concern tugging on your brow, "No, Its not. I can tell by the look on your face."

"Maybe you'd better sit down." I say, gesturing to the nearest couch cushion.

"Oh yeah. This is good news." You deadpan.

I resist the urge to glare at you, and, instead, sit next to you, calmly.

I'm nervous inside Louis, really, but, somehow, I manage to repress it, if only for a little while, at the moment.

Your eyes strike me, every time, Louis. Every. Single. Time.

I should really thank the person who said, "windows are the eyes to the soul.", because, it's so true, with you.. Your piercing gaze always says something to me, even when you don't say a word.

How calm and worried, they look, now, Louis; how calm you look.

I'm tempted to stroke your cheek, again, when you worry, like I do every time to you, as Superwoman.[/I]

My hands find their way of my pants pockets, hovering outside them, for a moment.

No, I can't. Not now.

Then, just as quickly, they fall back in.

I let out a slow, calming breath. Inwardly, I correct myself; making sure I don't use my superbreath on you by mistake.

"You know how you always complain that I run out on you, just when we're starting to talk about something important?"

"Yeah, I recall mentioning it once or twice." You lean back on the couch, arms folded.

"Well... There's a reason for that-" I paused, looking at you, "And, it has nothing to do with my fear of intimacy, or being afraid, or falling in love and things like that-"

I see you wait for a beat. A worried look registering on your face.

"Louis... I might as well say this honestly and simply..."

I take a deep breath.

It's now or never, Claire.

"I'm Super-"

Your phone rings, but you ignore it, relieving me, even if it's for just a minute.

It continues ringing, and I lean over to you and say, "Maybe you should answer that."

You sigh, annoyed at the communicational device for disturbing this conversation, but you're polite about it and nod.

You get up, and your quick stride says otherwise, but you hold that annoyance in, from years of being tough, snatching the phone from it's cradle.

"Hello?"

You pause, looking at me.

"Yes, she's here." You extend the phone to me.

"Who else knows I'm here?" I say to you, taking the phone from you.

But you don't say a word.

"Hello?"

A woman. Her voice steady and calm, replies, "We know everything about you, Ms. Kent. Or should I say... Superwoman."

I try to hide my reaction from you, turning away, towards the the wall full of your awards, as a distraction.

"I'm listening," My voice taking a hardened tone that you have never heard me in, my grip on the phone, tightened.

It's a deadly serious one, one that warrants my full attention, that you've only seen me do, as Superwoman.

The woman continues, "If you don't want the world to know your secret, go to a dumpster behind the Planet. You'll find an envelope with your name on it."

The line goes dead, and I, loosen my vice-like grip, shakily, setting the phone back into it's cradle.

"Who was it?" You ask, eyebrow perked.

"Huh? Oh...my hair dresser." I say, softly, still in shock.

"Your hair dresser?"

I know what you're thinking, Louis. It's another one of those lame "Cheese-Of-The-Month" lines that I've been so quick to adapt to, right?

[iII'm sorry, Louis, but, here's another one.[/i]

My last one, I promise; then the truth will be out, in the open, between you and me, and that's if I get to that dumpster in time.

"Yeah. I'm confirming my appointment. Look, Louis, I've really got to go." I say a little too quickly to you.

I see you furrow your brow, "Hold up. You were about to say something to me."

"I was?" I ask you, quizzically.

"Yeah. You said Louis, I'm super.'"

"Oh, right, right. I'm super-" I pause to look at my watch, for effect, then back at you,"Late for my haircut!"

I start to rise, "And I'm really sorry, but, I can't go to breakfast with you."

I see your shoulders slump, your eyes piercing at me, giving that infamous Mad Dog Lane glare, that I know all too well.

I backpedal to the door.

"But I'll see you at the office. Maybe we can have lunch, 'kay?"

You look perplexed as I open the door.

Silence fills the room, for a minute, and it just pains me to see you so... heartbroken.

I slam it shut.

I'm so sorry about this Louis, but, I had to leave you behind.

"Claire!"

]Your voice, again, haunts me, like the craving for your touch does; I know that one, all too well. It's tinged with worry. Fear. Uncertainty.

I quickly backpedal, again, then turn, running down the hallway.


I'm so sorry. So very sorry. I'll make it up to you, I promise, Louis.

As soon as I get up and out of range of the building, I lower my gaze, using my super hearing and x-ray vision to see how you're holding up.

I see you, frustrated, looking at the blow dryer with a scowl on.

I'm sorry, Louis. I had to.

You pick up the blow dryer, aiming it like a gun, at the bathroom door.

"Bang."

The previous post is a "bare bones" draft. I'm planning to put in more descriptions on Claire and what goes on in her head as she's thinking about letting Louis in on her secret...

UPDATE: the previous post has been edited to my liking, and yes, there IS dialogue FROM the episode, here, directly.

May need help switching that out and finding the right words to put in, here. :-/

Credit given where credit is due: to the writers, cast, and crew making this episode possible. But, mainly, to the writers and fans, because without you, folks, there would be no show.

Hope you like it, so far!

Ugh! Dumb italics!!!

Note to readers: All of Claire's thought speeches that are geared directly towards Louis with the secondary P.O.V. of "you", are the one's that are supposed to be italicized.

I'm kind of rusty when it comes to gestures, in general, and figuring out how the characters would do them.

Dialogue comes out well, with me, though.

I really have to give Sue S. a big kudos because her fics are just AMAZING, and I can only wish to write the way she does with "Flying Lessons" and "Brake Light Confessional".

Now to think of a title for this... "Unmasked"? "Touch"? Anyone was to help title it?

I believe you are missing your end italics marker after this line:

And it looks like you're missing your end bracket here:

You move back from thought to action after this line, so you need an ending italics marker here:

Working with italics in this format takes some practice (I should know the amount of italics I use in my stories :rolleyes: ). Just before you post make sure to double check your work by reviewing it in "Preview" mode. I'll be interested to read your story once you start posting it. It looks like you've changed everyone not just Lois & Clark (Does that mean Lex is Alexa now?! Hee hee)

Thanks for the help!! I'll try that out later in the day!

And yes, Lex is now Alexa, nicknamed "Lex"

Why do I see a catfight in Claire's future?

Because you're awesome. ^_-

Whew! and.. fixed!!!! ^_^

So? Good intro, so far, anyone?

I like the whole Louis on the missle flashback scene. It was different and something I could definitely picture.

One note: I doubt Claire goes to a barber. I'd change that to a hairdresser.

Does Louis look like Clark and Claire look like Lois or just masculinized and feminized versions of themselves?

I think this would be interesting story if not all the characters changed genders. If Martha and Jonathan were themselves, Perry, Jimmy, and Trask were themselves. I don't know about Cat. A TomCat would probably be thrown out the window by Louis before the end of the third episode. An Ellen and Sam that had switched would be an interesting twist, where the mom was never around because she was off having affairs and working too hard and the nurse dad ended up being the alcoholic raising the boys on his own, just saying.

Thanks! Noted! Will change the grammar to that bit. This Clois is Clark feminized/genderbent and Lois masculinized/genderbent. Funnily enough, I almost thought of switching everyone's genders around not only these two. Martha would've been Marty and Joseph would've been Josephine... But... I'll see what I can do about what you're suggesting, here!


Thanks for the tips!!!

And fixed!!! Gonna try out your sugesstions over the week and see what I can come up with on Ellen and Sam...and the rest of the cast...

Hi all!

Just droping by & letting you all know that I will finish up this great snippet,&, of course tweak the grammar errors, above, once I've got some free time on my hands, in the coming weeks.

Glad to hear you didn't fall off the side of the Earth. Looking forward to seeing what new stuff you have to add to this.

XD
Thanks!

All I need to do is two papers for my courses, then look up the episode trascripts from these two episodes...

Things should get pretty interesting, from there, If you all remember what happened in those two well written episodes.

There is another reason for having the wig. In one comic situation where Lois used a computer to figure out what would happen if she had come from Krypton instead of Superman, she used a black wig to hide her black hair.

However, since Clark Kent did the "cut your hair to see if you are Kryptongirl" test, it actually helped to have a wig.

Fortuantly for Clark in L&C, Diana Stride never came up with an idea like trying to cut his hair, since as we saw in "Chip off the Old Clark" even a single strand of his hair can break scissors.

I guess it works Claire going to Louis' apartment, but normally it would be the other way around.

Hmm, although which one has the car? Also, is Tempus still male?

I would think that they both would have cars.

Tempus? I, actually, haven't gotten up to that part, in the story! If you all want to read what i have, so far, it's still the last, & updated, version, up here. Check out the previous long post. It's a few posts above, here. Interesting thought, though!

I may plan that!


I just downloaded the episodes, to guide me through the process.

I, also, downloaded the episodes "Seconds", "Sex, Lies, & Videotape", & "Ultra Woman", as well. Yay me! ^___^.

I should be able to update this, within the week, or so, after I get my new eyeglasses. I need to set out time for this. Should be fun!

^___^.

Well, in this story, she doesn't wear a wig, but, she DOES laser-vision her hair cut, with the use of mirrors.

Look at one of the deleted scenes in Supergirl: The Movie to see how that worked.

Wasn't there an instance in the series where he laser-visioned his 5 o'clock shadow?

You know, you might consider some other things. Like nail lenght - Claire could wear her nails very long without having to worry about hangnails. :p

Personally, I don't think Claire has any use for a car - flying is much quicker than big city rush hour traffic any day of the week, anyway. And if she has to be seen using a car, there's always a cab.

Oh, and I can so see Superwoman threaten her reporter colleagues with "no interviews, no quotes, nothing" if they dare to call her Supergirl. (Maybe half the reporters call her Supergirl at first, but have to reconsider? Or maybe Louis comes up with Supergirl, only to be told not to use it?)

Anyway, I'm really looking forward to reading this story.

I guess that works. However in canon only Lois has a car, and I don't think even she does in Season 1, although the DP has cars they borrow on occasion, and then Lois borrows a car from Luthor.

Since the info on Ms. Kent's identity is provided by Tempus' journal, I figured his identity would come up in the episode. Although not neccesarily much more than the name, so it probably would work to be just vague about Tempus.


I just downloaded the episodes, to guide me through the process.

I, also, downloaded the episodes "Seconds", "Sex, Lies, & Videotape", & "Ultra Woman", as well. Yay me! ^___^.

I should be able to update this, within the week, or so, after I get my new eyeglasses. I need to set out time for this. Should be fun! [/QB][/QUOTE]

I can just see that scene.

Louis has just been flown into the DP from his hair-brain attempt to get on the Space station which nearly resulted in his being killed by a bomb, which the new heroine swalled. Carter Grant comes up to him and asks

"What does the S stand for"

Louis thinks for a bit and says "Supergirl".

Claire has just returned to the office and turns on Louis in fury. "Supergirl, you are such a chavanist pig Louis. She is a grown woman, and she saved your life and the lives of the 100 other people on that transport. And you have the audacity to call her Supergirl."

"OK, Claire, chill out" Louis responds "Will call her Superwoman. Will that make you happy."

Well, there is potential for a lot of fun.

^BRILLIANT!^

I'm just going to tweak this a bit, hold on:

"...Louis has just been flown into the DP from his hare-brained attempt to get on the space station which nearly resulted in his being killed by a bomb, which the new heroine has swallowed.

Carter Grant comes up to him and asks, "So, what does the big S stand for?"

Louis thinks for a bit and says "Supergirl.".

As I hear this from you, I walk back into the office glaring, at the both of you.

"Supergirl?! Really? You're such a chavanist pig, Louis! She is a grown woman! Besides, she just saved your life and the lives of the 100 other people on that transport. And you have the audacity to call her Supergirl"

"OK, Claire! Jeez! Chill out, why don't you?" Louis responds "I'll call her Superwoman. Will that make you happy?"

"Very."

I just noticed this! Thanks for the heads up!


Very true.

I haven't thought of that. I always thought that she'd laser vision them short & managable, but, that's also a possibility. ^___-

Very true!

^BRILLIANT.^

Can I use that, with your permission, of course? :3

Thanks!

I can't wait to get more of this done!

Oh, TONS.

Actually, the "no interviews, no nothing" stuff happens in another fic where Lois gets superpowers. She wants to be called Psychic, and some newspapers instead call her Psychic Girl. (At least I think that's the name it was.)

Re Cat Grant: Just keep her - and add the comics canon figure of Steve Lombard to your story, and you have a male counterpart to Cat. Which leaves you to play with Cat and Claire. Catfight, anyone?

There's also no need to switch Lex' gender, for a male Lex can still be very interested in Claire while playing his battle games with Superwoman. Of course, Claire would know him for who he was, but it might still be interesting to see her rebuff him time and again, and him bugging her apartment and "accidentally" running into her wherever she goes.

Please make that a hare-brained attempt, not a hair-brained one. I'd suggest you request a beta reader to help you with your grammar and whatever else turns up.

Thanks, I'll try this out. ;)I can't believe I didn't correct that part! : EDIT: It's fixed! : 3

Hello, all!!

Just popping in.


I've got the episodes downloaded to get my story up & running, again. Plus, all 4 seasons of the show on DVD.


I'll try to add more additions to this beauty over the next couple of weeks or so.


Take care, folks!

Hey there, FOLCers!

Sorry I haven't been up here as often as I wished, over the semester!

My college workload's winding down, though, & I hope to be able to add more lines to this fic & the one following it.

Have a great night, FOLC's!

P.s.
My birthday's coming up, on May 9th!
Just letting you all know.