Welcome, new writer! You would probably benefit from one or two beta readers to help you flesh out your story and check over the plot. Simply ask for help and see what responses you get. Telling a little of the plot might help pique the beta readers interests.
Another thought is to read extensively on the Archive for similar types of stories to what you intend to write.
If you are basing your story on episodes from Lois and Clark, the scripts are listed above the main page on this site.
Good luck!
Artemis
