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It's a very short scene, though, and it wouldn't be nearly as funny - it depends on the word.
Well, you know what they say -- one man's "funny" is another man's "offensive." So of course we try to tilt away from the offensive side. smile

You know, if your author really likes the scene as is, and doesn't want to change it, there's no rule stating she has to have it on these boards or on the archives, or to have it *only* at those places. She could put it up on Annesplace instead/as well, or publish it herself on another website. No matter how much we might wish to, the boards admin staff and the archive EIC do *not* rule the whole Internet goofy

PJ


"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

--Stardust, Caroline K