This thing doesn't seem to work for me. I've only managed to go over parts 1-4 so far I think I'm inwardly procrastinating because I don't really know what I want to do with this story. I've been considering abandoning it, Archiving it as it is, re-writing it, deleting all the parts that are giving me a hard time, splitting it in two seperate stories... and I still can't make up my mind about it. Argh.
On the bright side... I'm done polishing the first 18 pages!