Wow, CC. Really great stuff thumbsup

I about swallowed my tongue when I thought that Tempus had come back only to find out it was Lois's nightmare! Geez!

I do like that she's struggling with what's happened - has become too much of a victim, and that Clark is trying to snap her out of it.

I am confused - I thought that perhaps the baby could be real Clark's, but from the beginning of this section, it seems that he's decided it is definitely not his. I think this might be a bit of suspense to keep me hanging - in which case it's working!

I hate to say it but I'm not liking the AltLois/Lane very much. I guess I should be understanding about the fact that she came back to find someone else living her life, but she just seems so harsh with AltClark. I'm going to hold judgment, but I hope she softens up a bit.

Can't wait to read the next part.
Lynn

You know that boy'd walk on water for you? Or he'd drown tryin'. -Perry White to Lois in Just Say Noah