Ok I am satisfied now<g> That was much better for me. Very nice in fact. OK there is still the Superman thing between them. My Question is will Clark do it first and then tell her he is Superman. Will he give her a choice, like he usually does? Or will he tell her after the deed. Ah The Deed? will that be something you write for the nfanfic section? Anyway It is much better with the wrap up. I hope you write more soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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