Thank you for posting part 3!

It's interesting that Lois has seen through Clark's alter ego so quickly in this story, when she's been so blind in canon. And once she sees that he's playing a role, I'm surprised she's not more suspicious of his reasons for the deception. He hasn't dazzled her like Luthor has, so I would expect Lois to launch an investigation to find the real Clark Kent, even if she doesn't plan to print the story; I can't imagine her curiosity being satisfied with less.

It'll be interesting to see where the story goes from here. I'll be anxiously waiting for more.