Well done. A delightful part and I love the way Lois dug to the meat of the matter.
So sorry she can't seem to find a way to spin it. I would think you'd see the obvious spin, treat Clark as the writer he pretends to be while making note of the depth of research.
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the young girl who was a domestic slave in a diplomat’s home in suburban Maryland.
Lane could dwell on that and the bits from the other three novels, and compare the novels publication with any public response.
