One thing I may want to change - I didn't want to imply that Perry already discovered what Lois does. So maybe I need to rework that a little.
I don't know. It's kind of nice that Perry worked it out before her, and not just because he's a more experienced reporter. It would make sense to me because Perry is more removed from the topic of Superman than Lois is, and so he sees it with a bit more of a clear head. I could definitely see him figuring it out before Lois. Besides, it also gives a nice touch in the sense that he's really appearing as a surrogate father, caring for her and protecting her, and offering her double relief by making her investigation skills kick in again and by the conclusions she comes to.
Just mho.
Kaethel
