Thanks you guys! This makes me feel so great. You write something and all you hope is that other people like it.

I'll take your advice and wait a couple of days to post parts 2 and 3. Since I'm a newbie, stuff like this is good to know.

One thing I may want to change - I didn't want to imply that Perry already discovered what Lois does. So maybe I need to rework that a little.

Thanks again!

You know that boy'd walk on water for you? Or he'd drown tryin'. -Perry White to Lois in Just Say Noah