Thanks for the positive feedback! For a first timer, that means a lot - very encouraging.

I actually have parts 2 and 3 finished - wrote the whole story in a couple of days and only broke it up to make it easier to read.

I'll post the other two parts later today.

Thanks again!! smile

You know that boy'd walk on water for you? Or he'd drown tryin'. -Perry White to Lois in Just Say Noah