Bakasi wrote:
I liked the way you described Clark's feelings as he lifted off into the sky. That was very poetic and touching.
Inner poet in me again. I think all of us have tried to imagine what it would be like to fly completely free out there in an open sky with nothing to hold us down. I can't imagine how it would be to be able to feel that and then lose it for a time from such a terrible ordeal as Clark. Poor guy. . .
The fortress of solitude is really an interesting twist
<rocks on feet and whistles to self> Thanks!
Woody wrote:
Loved the whole chapter, but I have to point out that every time I think you've laid the best cliffhanger on us that you can, you surprise me. That last line, "He took a deep breath, and began," especially with the line before about all the questions swarming in his brain, is so amazingly "open."
My little sister often says that I am cruel, sadistic, and just as bad as Logram for my general meanness. After finishing a chapter it is not unusual for her to dive at me and attack me, demanding the next chapter despite the fact that I don't even have it written yet.
Generally speaking, she makes me feel quite loved, just like you guys do with those chainsawmen and wild-stick men . . . lol.
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Okay, I'm getting in a weird mood, so I'd better take off and go write.
Have a great day, everyone, and thank you for your reviews!
Rachel (SmirkyRaven)
