I knew it would be sad, being that it's a death fic and all that, but I didn't expect this story to get to me that much. It was all I could do not to cry... I felt so sorry for poor Clark. :-( When he's counting the hours and minutes, it just broke my heart. (which is a good sign in a weird way, cause it means I really got into the story)
I think it's a great story. Very well written and you did a wonderful job with all the characters. I would have loved to see more of a reaction from Lois' father, though... He somehow sounds like he doesn't care very much, I dunno...
Other than that little detail which bugged me, I really loved this story. Well done!
~Lara
