Missed out on a chance to add a nice emotional cliff hanger by having the doctor inform Clark of Lois' particular dilemna.
You know, you're absolutely right, Tank! I originally intended to stop about two pages further on. Don't know how I missed that last night.
Anyway, since it makes more sense in the context of what will be part 2, I've added in the remainder of what was planned to be part 1. So, anyone who's interested, if you refresh the thread you'll find more story in there now.
And... novel? What novel?
Wendy
