Originally posted by John Lambert:
I think that should be "when he'd done". You could also go "when he had done", but that would probably be a little out of line with your general style, and anyway the first way makes the mistake a lot less.
Oh, fine, we'll stick with my usual style.
Thanks.
I also from re-reading realized that Clark told Lois he was from another dimension just after telling her about Smallville. So technically he did tell her it was a different Kansas, she just seems to not have picked up on it then.
Um... he told her he was Smallville, Kansas, not a "different Kansas".
I think that should be "some of those".
Right again! Fixed.
I think that should be "what a great".
Only by those who prefer correct grammar.
All better now.
Thanks.
I think you have one too many "that ideas" there.
Perhaps, I did, but not anymore! Say bye-bye to those extra ideas, Lexy! Thanks.
I sort of thing it should be "arrived in Metropolis". The current way might be workable, but it sounds awkward.
Oh, that whole sentence was a mess.
