Lex waved that idea off that idea with a flip of his hand. “Let’s hold off on that for now. What news do you have for me on Mr. Kent?”
I think you have one too many "that ideas" there.
We do know he checked into the Apollo Hotel on May 14th when we assume he arrived into Metropolis.
I sort of thing it should be "arrived in Metropolis". The current way might be workable, but it sounds awkward.
“We haven’t yet have been able to establish any activity in Metropolis prior to the fourteenth, but we’re still looking into it.
I think the "have" is unnedded there.
