Originally posted by John Lambert: I had forgotten how close Clark came to kissing Lois as SM in this part. I do not think his feeling her hair really counts as keeping proper distance as SM. I think  , of I guess I can't say that because it relates to a later episode. I think either you want to change "had" to "was", which is the simplest way, or say "Had been almost". I am pretty sure the way it is right now just does not work. Thanks. Fixed.
VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.
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