/pumps fist/ Caught this before the link for FDK was uploaded.
Yet another great chapter! I think it worked fine without Lois and Jimmy's investigation included, but maybe that's just me.
I thought it was a funny conversation between Perry and Clark in the closet. (Is that from canon? It seems so familiar to me, but I don't remember precisely... so it probably is.) In which case, I'm impressed with how you're having AltClark follow Clark's bootsteps so carefully. Though I do wish he'd stuck around just a few minutes longer during Lois and Lucy's conversation... would have explained a lot. (I know what you're going to say- 'where's the fun in that, Mouse?' And then you'll give me an evil grin and I'll have to concede and say how true you are and that I appreciate the evilness, but it's not so fun when I'm reading it, and you'll say something else about how much more evilness you have planned, and I'll be stuck going
in horror and excitement. That about wrap it up? :p )
Phew. Anywhosit. Great chapter, and can't wait for the 2nd(3rd)!
