Oooh! Double Darth Michael feedback! clap

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So, this chapter will be from Lois’s POV? /expects lots of complaining to be going on. The bed is too soft. There’s a pea in the bed. The water is too hot. The water is too cold. Kal doesn’t want me. …
Erm...not quite. But it's coming.

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Umm… ‘heart’? Doesn’t one have to have one in the first place…?
Yes, but it does count, even if it's at the center of a glacier in Lois' chest.

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That would be fun
clap Love when that happens.

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Conjugal rites (sic)?
"Today is National Have Sex With Your Spouse Day. Can't mess with tradition."

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“I have a great audio-visual training course on how to be a concubine in the bedroom”?
rotflol

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They’re the smart ones?
Smart? Or lucky?

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Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Although, can you imagine a woman like Lois hearing petitions? She’d likely blow a gasket over the first husband complaining that his wife objected to the concubine staying the night in their bedroom.
shock indeed! peep

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That’s gonna upset the labor market. And the concubine situation. /imagines lots of riots in the planet’s future/
lol

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Like the politicians do today? A very democratic practice
Only there are no two parties. wink

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They could always say that they got ‘delayed’?
That might prompt inappropriate comments from Jai.

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“Look, Lois. I’m not sure how best to phrase this, so I’ll put it straight: At first I thought that you just had a rockin’ bod’ and I mean *wowza!* But now, I mean, who’d have thought that there’s actually something going on behind those cute doe-eyes of yours?” Hmm… yes, that should work, right?
I can't imagine how that could *possibly* go wrong.

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So, that’s how Krypton’s gonna blow up?
No explosions this time around.

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No. It’s sleepovers in frilly nighties and pillow fights.
Followed by...bonding time?


Battle On,
Deadly Chakram

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