Great start! You've captured my interest with this storyline. I'm looking forward to Kal meeting his betrothed.
I have met the girl you are to marry a few times when I have gone to visit with Samm. She is a rare beauty and a sweet girl.
Sweet Puppy Lyne instead of Mad Dog Lane? That is a change!
I think Kal won't be disappointed when he meets his future wife, but after the marriage all bets are off and we will have to see how they cope with the situation.
You can already post chapter 2.
Andreia
