I have to say I was not bored by this story at all! I am very intrigued to see where you go with this story.
I like that Lois is picking up the cues between Superman, Martha, and Jonathan. I wonder if this will cause her to figure out the secret.....
Perry: (To Lois) Honey, this could be greatest story since Superman came to town. By-the-by, where is that husband of yours? --Faster Than a Speeding Vixon