Very interesting
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Always glad to have new writers!
One thing that I would like is if you labeled the sections by POV. I've done the alternating POV thing [see 'On the Other Hand' or it's sequel 'Unanswered Prayers' here on the boards if you want to see how I did it] and that was confusing to me.
Otherwise I'm intrigued and can't wait for more
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Carol
