DJ,
Another great part. I loved the revelation scene. One thing that is a common theme in revelation stories is that Lois is justifiably angry and Clark apologizes over and over again. However, I can't wait to see how this develops because in the first part of the story we see how Clark (with good reason) believes that she doesn't trust him, so why should he have ever told her about himself? Lois may not see it the same way (at least right away).
Regardless I think the next parts will be high on the angst-o-meter, and I am excited about it.
-Em