Hmm...DJ. I think I have to agree with everyone who said that once a week isn't enough. This needs to be updated more often than that!
I loved it - I like angsty, waffy stories. They're my favourites. Now, you just need to listen to the little men
telling you to post more often. Okay? Look how sharp their spears look! Aren't you scared?
I would quote lots, but like others I think I'd end up quoting the whole part. Plus I
really need to work on Part 5 of my story... It's not going to write itself!
Well done, DJ.
~Anna.
