Ahh DJ this story looks fantastic! I have to join the masses when I say only once a week? With this sort of cliff hanger? I'll never survive!
I loved this start! I'm kind of a sucker for Clark getting hurt. I have no idea why. I'm usually not so... sadistic. But I love it. Especially since Lois will hopefully come to her senses and realize she LOVES Clark. Even though I suppose she already has, partly anyway. I can't wait to see where you take this.
Laura